Friday 13 March 2009

Backstage Pass Double Page Spread First Draft




1 comment:

Mr Lau said...

Masthead in top left probably not necessary as the white background draws too much attention and disrupts page flow somewhat.

Photograph credit should be much briefer. Simply:

Photography: Tyrone Lewis

Should suffice.

Check conventions in other magazines.

Check hyphenation. Is this common in print magazines?

Q4) There's never. TYPO...
"What's going on." Apostrophe

Be careful of Spelling, Punctuation and Grammar.

Q5 Rise Against's songs

Use quotation marks or itallics for song names e.g. "Prayer for the refuge"

Perhaps make red text slightly lighter so it is more blood red instead of a dark red which is hard to read against a dark black background.

"The Sufferer and the witness" italics

It's always hard, it's...TYPO's

artist's success (YOUTUBE COMMENT) use apostrophe's

Audience of one, Re-education need italics and/or quotes

Last Q:

"So are you proud..." Grammar

A beautiful interview nonetheless. I like the flow, the answers seem very authentic. Good empathy and a nice writing style. Well done.